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Women fighting over red shoes -- predictable.
Haha. Tried to keep it lighthearted. XD
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Given 2013-06-15
Wizard of Oz by ~neonsquiggle "is one zinger of a six-word summary" (suggester's words). ( Suggested by ShadowedAcolyte and Featured by neurotype )
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Ujalasocks2001 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! XD
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sockhiddenunderarook Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
83.3% plagiarised. 
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:iconneonsquiggle:
neonsquiggle Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Excuse me? From what?
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SleepyWishes Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2013

:D Amazing work of literature.

 

Congrats on the DD!

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:iconneonsquiggle:
neonsquiggle Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much!
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gretchen-kessler Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2013   General Artist
For some reason, the fact that this is filed under "Short Stories" made it even funnier. I mean, it IS a story, and it, well, it IS short. It's like when you interpret a school assignment or chore purposefully a little off, but TECHNICALLY meeting the requirements of what they asked you. Like, "No mom I put the laundry in the dryer...but you never said I had to turn it ON."

I laughed so hard at this.
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L-Inque Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
LOL
Love it. Especially since I am not a woman with a shoe fetish.
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:iconneonsquiggle:
neonsquiggle Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hahaha, thank you so much!
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Bluepheonyx96 Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Perfect.
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:iconneonsquiggle:
neonsquiggle Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks so much!
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Echo-of-Echo Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013
Don't mean to be horrible, but does anyone else feel like this is pretty sexist?
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:iconneonsquiggle:
neonsquiggle Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It kind of is.
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:iconneurotype:
neurotype Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
The author and myself are female as well :B
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sockhiddenunderarook Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat? :o

I thought you were male.
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neurotype Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is definitely not a penis!
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VeRTiGo-P Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013  Student Interface Designer
Well I'm a girl and I find it hilarious... That's just because I hate my gender sometimes xD
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ShadowedAcolyte Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013
I'm so glad ^neurotype picked this! I love it so much. Sorry if the haters get you down. If so, take heart, because I see a lot more happiness and mirth in these comments than kvetching.
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Schneefuechsin Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Congratulations on the DD! :hug:
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neonsquiggle Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much!
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Schneefuechsin Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Your welcome! :happybounce:
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:iconj-ko:
J-ko Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013
It's brilliant because it's true!
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neonsquiggle Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aww, thanks so much!
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RiRi216 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013
interesting.
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neonsquiggle Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you~
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glasscat13 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013  Student General Artist
Read the books. You'll see that the women were fighting for more.
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neonsquiggle Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I've read them, and I know. This was meant to be a mild mockery~
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The-invisble-ninja Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013  Student Artist
XD one time in class my teacher was like you all know the story the wizard of oz and some guy yells out yeah it was just about women fighting over shoes :XD:
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Hawkieface Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hehe.

My day, made.
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:iconneonsquiggle:
neonsquiggle Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aww, that's great to hear! Thanks~
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Hawkieface Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Haha, no problem!~
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:iconkidai:
kidAi Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013
nice haiku
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:iconneonsquiggle:
neonsquiggle Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It's not a haiku, but thanks. :)
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:iconkidai:
kidAi Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013
well, it isn't 5-7-5, but eh... still funny
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neonsquiggle Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks~
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OgawaBurukku Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013  Professional General Artist
Ha! But instead of "predictable" I think "typical" would have been a better fit.
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neonsquiggle Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Wow, that actually does sound nice. Thanks!
:heart:
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blessedarrow Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I was thinking the same!
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TheGalleryOfEve Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Congratulations on your well-deserved DD!!! :iconflyingheartsplz::iconlainloveplz::iconflyingheartsplz: :clap::clap::clap:
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neonsquiggle Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Awww, thank you so much!
:la:
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TheGalleryOfEve Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're welcome!!! :iconflyingheartsplz::blowkiss::iconflyingheartsplz:
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SnikkiPikkins Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013
Ahahahahahahaha, how brilliantly short. I love tongue-in-cheek wit, and this strikes just the right chord.
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neonsquiggle Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much! I amused myself, writing this. It's nice to have people appreciate brevity.

:rofl:
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SnikkiPikkins Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013
I'm enormously jealous - I can't tell a joke in less than three pages, and here you've done it in 6 words. Nicely done :D.
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neonsquiggle Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aww, that's too kind of you! I don't usually work with short poems and prose, but I'm glad to have succeeded with this one!
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gamewizard-2008 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Hahaha!!! XD
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neonsquiggle Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks!
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gamewizard-2008 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Welcome!
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Charmed-Ravenclaw Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Made me smile.
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neonsquiggle Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
That's great to know!
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TheEmptyChest Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013
Ha! Clever. And when you think about it, yeah, totally predictable. :giggle:
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