how to write better poetry. by littleblueraccoon, literature
Literature
how to write better poetry.
i.
drink down the words
of the greats in a wine glass.
hell, drink down the words
of teenagers struggling
to straighten out the
gas and brake pedals
of their pens.
drink it all,
carefully structured stanzas
and sloppy melting words
alike.
become
blind drunk.
ii.
make time for it
even if it's midnight
and all the world is humming
its sleep song.
dig up your soul
and shake down the dirt
over and over
until it becomes habit.
(and I know that might
sound like a pretty metaphor,
but it's easier said than done.)
iii.
do it when it hurts.
do it when that one person
you never thought you'd lose
leaves you nightcrawling.
do it when you're so ti
my mother used to say,
"never fall in love with something
that can leave you behind."
now I understand, now I know
that humans were
given legs for a reason,
that moving on
is a state of mind on migration.
tell me,
if I told you I loved you,
would you cut out my tongue?
I can still hear your voice when you said
you could never love anyone else,
and now all I can think is
liar
liar
liar.
she extracts her heart
from her cavernous center
like a no-good tooth.
coughing, she serves it up
on fine painted ceramics.
he lifts his fork,
spears the meat.
chewing, jaw swaying,
he samples a bite.
then he frowns
and spits into
his
napkin.
we're all a little stardust by Nullibicity, literature
Literature
we're all a little stardust
You are the reason I am consumed in astronomy, but the star-promises that shot across our youth will shatter in some other universe, with the rising of some other moon to greet your sun.
After that, it's science. I'll bleed every 1.00794 unit from my blood, but we both know I'm a pincushion mess; it won't all make it down the drain, and I can only scrub the ache so hard. I can only try so hard to live without you before my ribs unzip to chasms, every memory so large I must expand my lungs to fit them all.
Sometimes they claw their way from my throat, with the hatred housed in little bird nests, because you could always hide where
I think I imagined my life.
One prayer spent, an angel held my mind and supported its weight... offered to steal me away in the 8th grade despite the fact I'd let him down in ridicule and silence. In that moment, I believed in God.
but God existed in everything and nothing, and it became hard deciphering the holy from the chosen. So I dined with sin one night when her lips were too sweet and I was too caged; she'd put her nails inside my poet lines, with a sadness too familiar I could only choke on disappointment.
A white-out later--lips left only a little less swollen than the eyes--I was hoping I was simply malnourished in weak-spirit...
clutch tight to Gandhi and Plath—
and maybe the sicker works of Poe,
his Annabel Lee—
and open cotton ears to the streetlamps
covering shadow streets, shadow people,
and tell me why we breathe.
there’s space in your sheets,
and I’m glad I didn’t crawl in and nest
like blue jays in the spring...though one
time I did fall in, and it was far from graceful—
dirt and mud on your quilt and just hand grenades
in my right breast, waiting for your fingers
to pull out all the pins.
Your love smells like snow
in the deep of August, sucking
me like mosquitoes and you.
damn, you always had a talented
tongue, knowing just what to say
to roll me between your teeth and
keep me there; and I was hoping—
no, trusting— I’d not be crushed.
I should have known when
you raised your bones against me,
when you clattered your molars
together but never bothered hiding
the truth below your belt.
And a part of me says
I was in love with you.
on the day we are supposed to meet,
i will be too sad to get out of bed.
destiny will knock insistently on my door, will
stick its head through the opening and call my name,
softly and then louder when i do not respond.
it will pick its way through the chaos of
my bedroom, over shoes and socks and sweaters
i haven’t worn in a week and shake my shoulder.
i will close my eyes and roll over.
i will have eaten too much the day before. i will have not
eaten at all the day before. i will feel like my hands
are only good for dropping second chances on the floor next to
dirty underwear and last week’s failed midterm and half full cups
orange crush, feverfire, a girl beneath the wave by nawkaman, literature
Literature
orange crush, feverfire, a girl beneath the wave
there are only six people in the world, you know
but I am hurtling around like spacerock, splashing down
into a genetic whirlpool of pixie dust: here, diamond; here, flumes
forming,
inch by inch erotic and contorted into contours we can fathom,
deep ravines of ravenous need, all flesh and marrow
mixing in our minds like oxygen and wine, bringing out the flavors
but you aren't contained, you aren't contained
more like an idea of where two concepts interconnect,
the joining of skin and skin and purpose, still raw and unknown
but my god when you look at me like that
when you stare into the abyss and reach in with greedy fingers
pull out th